Your interpretation in the last paragraph is almost right, but the point of evaluation, and some logical quantifiers seem incorrect (or atleast it's phrased a little awkwardly). Also your index for interpreting the RHS should be $\partial_{n+i}$. Here's a general rule in physics: is you have a quantity which should be a function of a quantity "$\ddot{\smile}$", but somehow miraculously becomes a function another quantity "$:)$", then what it really means is that there is an extra composition which is going on, which the author has not made explicit.
Hamilton's Equations:
Let me just spell out in full gory detail how (I sometimes like) to "read" Hamilton's equations. Start with a $2n$-dimensional smooth symplectic manifold $(M, \omega)$, and a certain smooth $H: M \to \Bbb{R}$. Then, we get an induced vector field on $M$ via $X_H = \omega^{\sharp}(dH)$ (the musical isomorphism). Then, the fully geometric way of stating Hamilton's equations is that a smooth curve $\gamma: I \subset \Bbb{R} \to M$ ($I$ an open interval which doesn't have to be all of $\Bbb{R}$) is said to satisfy Hamilton's equations (with respect to $H$) iff $\gamma$ is an integral curve of the vector field $X_H$.
In terms of a Darboux chart $(U, \chi)$, where the coordinate functions are labelled as $\chi(\cdot) = \left(q^1(\cdot), \dots, q^n(\cdot), p_1(\cdot), \dots, p_n(\cdot) \right)$, the condition of $\gamma$ being an integral curve of $X_H$ can be equivalently written as: for all $i \in \{1, \dots, n\}$, and all $t \in I \cap \gamma^{-1}[U]$,
\begin{align}
\begin{cases}
(q^i \circ \gamma)'(t) = \dfrac{\partial H}{\partial p_i}\bigg|_{\gamma(t)} &\equiv \partial_{n+i}(H \circ \chi^{-1})_{\chi(\gamma(t))} \\\\
(p_i \circ \gamma)'(t) = -\dfrac{\partial H}{\partial q^i}\bigg|_{\gamma(t)} &\equiv -\partial_{i}(H \circ \chi^{-1})_{\chi(\gamma(t))}
\end{cases}
\end{align}
where $\equiv$ above means "same thing written more explicitly/in different notation".
Euler-Lagrange Equations:
Although you didn't ask about this, let me give a second illustration of my "general rule" above. The Euler-Lagrange equations are typically written as
\begin{align}
\dfrac{d}{dt} \dfrac{\partial L}{\partial \dot{q}^i} &= \dfrac{\partial L}{\partial q^i}
\end{align}
This is particularly infamous for causing a lot of confusion on its meaning, especially with regards to "how can $\dot{q}^i$ and $q^i$ be treated as independent variables" and so on.
Anyway, here, the setup is that we have a smooth $n$-dimensional manifold $Q$ (almost always we assume we have a Riemannian/Lorentizian metric $g$ depending on what purposes we have in mind... but for now we don't need it). Next, we have a smooth function $L: TQ \to \Bbb{R}$. In this case, since everything is a function on manifolds, how can we even take time derivatives of $\dfrac{\partial L}{\partial \dot{q}^i}$?
Well, what we actually mean is that given a chart $(U, \chi)$ on $TQ$, whose coordinate functions we label as $\chi(\cdot) = \left( q^1(\cdot), \dots, q^n(\cdot), \dot{q}^1(\cdot), \dots, \dot{q}^n(\cdot)\right)$ a smooth curve $\gamma : I \to Q$ satisfies the Euler-Lagrange equations on the chart $(U, \chi)$ if the tangent lift $\gamma' : I \to TQ$ is such that for all $t \in I \cap (\gamma')^{-1}[U]$ and all $i \in \{1, \dots, n\}$,
\begin{align}
\dfrac{d}{ds}\bigg|_{s=t} \left(s \mapsto \dfrac{\partial L}{\partial \dot{q}^i}\bigg|_{\chi(\gamma'(s))}\right) &= \dfrac{\partial L}{\partial q^i} \bigg|_{\chi(\gamma'(t))}
\end{align}
which being even more explicit means that
\begin{align}
\dfrac{d}{ds}\bigg|_{s=t} \left( s \mapsto \partial_{n+i}\left( L \circ \chi^{-1}\right)_{\chi(\gamma'(s))} \right) &= \partial_{i}\left( L \circ \chi^{-1}\right)_{\chi(\gamma'(t))}.
\end{align}
BTW, here $\gamma': I \to TQ$ obviously doesn't mean the limit of a difference quotient, since the target space of $\gamma$ is a manifold $Q$. In this context, for each $t \in I$, $\gamma'(t) := T\gamma_t(1_t) \in T_{\gamma(t)}Q$ is the tangent mapping/push-forward mapping of $\gamma$ at $t$, namely $T\gamma_t : T_tI = T_t\Bbb{R} \to T_{\gamma(t)}Q$, applied to the unit tangent vector $1_t \in T_t \Bbb{R}$.
As you can see, the notation gets pretty cumbersome very easily, and it requires a LOT of words to define all the objects before hand. This is partly why people often use the coordinate functions $q^i, \dot{q}^i, p_i$ with two meanings: sometimes they really mean it as functions from an open subset of a manifold into $\Bbb{R}$, but sometimes they mean it as a "function of time" by composing with a curve which maps from an interval into a manifold.