I have developed an idea to explain quantum entanglement to a layperson. I would like to discuss it over here and question about issues with it.
Suppose if person A has a box with a robotic hand holding a pen above two blank papers. The two blank papers are separated by a carbon copy paper which imprints whatever is drawn on the first onto another.
Now, the robotic hand randomly draws a straight arrow on one of the paper. It gets copied on the other paper below it. However, the person holding the box has no idea in which direction the arrow points as the box is closed.
Now, somehow we are able to spatially separate one of the papers without Person A knowing anything about the drawn arrow on it. It is given to Person B let's say in another city.
Now, both A and B open their boxes to reveal the direction in which the arrows were drawn and are surprised to find both of their arrows point in the same direction on the paper.
Is this a nice way to explain entanglement? Are there any flaws, misconceptions or warning which need to be addressed before mentioning this analogy? Is initial spatial proximity a necessity for quantum entanglement?